Can you rate the 1st page of my short story please, 1-10?

I love it! It's actually really good, it's interesting and well written. A good story doesn't depend on only what it's talking about but about the way it's written - vocabulary, structure, etc - and you've pulled it off :D I do agree with the person above me about how it's going a bit fast, but since I imagined it as a sort of introduction to the whole story, I like it!